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I want you by ~gone4ever:icongone4ever:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Fixed




I want you,
but baby, you dont know how.
I want you alone.
I want you so much right now.

I want you,
to know all of my lies.
I want you to hurt,
each time I cry.

I want you,
to see why I am me.
Cause you made me like this.
You deserve to bleed.

I want you,
to go through what I go through.
Cause then you will know.
Just how much I want you.

I want you,
to know just how much I bled.
I want you alone.
Baby, I want you dead
©2005-2009 ~gone4ever
:icongone4ever:

Author's Comments

I wrote this for no one in specfic, I'm just in a bad mood.


pic found at [link] thanks

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~SaM-vS-cEnTuRy Jun 1, 2005, 12:14:40 PM
That's really something.. I like the way you've included want and hate together :)

--
Gohan, "Atleast he doesn't have his sword out anymore."
Krillin, "Yeah and your dad put his finger away, too."


Vegeta, "That guy just pointed his finger and Kakarot fell down!"

:giggle:
:iconnocomment:
~NoComment Jun 1, 2005, 5:54:27 PM
oh wow. very powerful poem. i think the last line is my favorite...good job sam!

--
"you're a real hooker...i'm gonna slap you in public..."
:icondashboardgrl18:
~DaShBoArDGrL18 Jun 1, 2005, 6:54:31 PM
hmm .. good, but kind of predictable. I like the ending line. Very powerful.
:icongone4ever:
~gone4ever Jun 1, 2005, 8:00:23 PM
thanks

--
I swear I'll know your face in the crowd
And I'll hear your voice so loud
When you're whispering...

Hey unfaithful I will teach you
To be stronger (to be stronger)
Hey unloving
I will love you
And will love you...

:weed: + :weed: + :weed
:iconfuyu-kiri:
~fuyu-kiri Jun 4, 2005, 4:54:36 PM
amazing.......you did a wonderful piece
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~SatansSporn Jun 28, 2005, 6:32:42 AM
I like it :D I especially like the last line :D ... I can also relate to this piece

--
*And now were left with BROKEN PROMISES my heart can't take no more*
I am the one and only purplepenguin FEAR ME!!!
For those of you who think you can bring me down, go ahead and try, I know I can't be brought down any lower but you can motherfuckers!!
:icongone4ever:
~gone4ever Jun 28, 2005, 2:12:08 PM
thanks!

--
I swear I'll know your face in the crowd
And I'll hear your voice so loud
When you're whispering...

Hey unfaithful I will teach you
To be stronger (to be stronger)
Hey unloving
I will love you
And will love you...

:weed: + :weed: + :weed
:iconsatanssporn:
~SatansSporn Jun 30, 2005, 5:32:35 AM
no problemo :D

--
*And now were left with BROKEN PROMISES my heart can't take no more*
I am the one and only purplepenguin FEAR ME!!!
For those of you who think you can bring me down, go ahead and try, I know I can't be brought down any lower but you can motherfuckers!!
:iconreal-life-illusion:
~real-life-illusion Jul 7, 2005, 3:24:45 PM
*raped by best friend* I LOVE THAT PIECE!!
I WANNA PRINT IT OUT AND SEND IT TO HIM!!!
but i'm not gonna :(

--
"I'll love you untill you're done"
~~love is a battlefield_madonna~~
~~its a proven fact_ more than 99% of divorces start with marriage~~
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